On reflection of the production process and the responses from both audience and peers I have learnt a lot regarding the work made- what worked/didn't work, what signifiers came to the forefront of the work and how the meaning and effect was understood from the installation showing.
As the the process of making the work, there were various aspects of it that changed. The main change was that of the equiste corpse and taking the visuals back to its simplistic state. This change was something I felt was a good choice as it stripped back too many extra bodies and just left the installation with the dancers physical and virtual bodies.
On reflection of this change if I had thought this earlier then I could have left out the green-screening and editing stage of the additional performer movements. Spending more time on capturing a sharper and more precise film of my dancers moves and then creating more of an interesting dynamic background to the green-screen. Even though this additional filming wasn't used, I am glad I completed this within the process as I have learnt a lot regarding the cropping, shaping and masking of film footage and how to isolate an area of given footage for exporting.
After talking through our individual work and how our audiences and peers read the work, I felt like I could consider each individual element a little clearer and how the spectator viewed my installation...
Comments concerning the aesthetic of the piece was very positive and individuals found it very striking to watch but the meaning wasn't always clear for a few of my peers. Regarding this I do feel little disappointed with how faint the live footage was against the mediated footage. I should have experimented with this more to see how to gain the best effect- particularly within the ]performances p a c e[ environment (with a lot of variation in the light and not enough contrast in the space compared to the visuals projected).
One element of the work I feel that needed to change and from feedback would have helped was that of the positioning of the piece and the set-up of the work. Placing of the installation and my performer against the corner of the space meant the meaning of the work was lost and just faded into the walls and the live and mediated interplay disappeared.
Bringing the piece more centralised into the space would have meant the spectator would have been able to move around the piece, seeing others watching enclosed the intimacy of piece to a higher level. Drawing attention to the live recording played back onto the performing body. This is something I plan to explore further during my next lab and removing another performer and placing myself within the centre of the work both controlling and performing. Firstly for the practicalities of rehearsing and getting my performer in the space to run the piece at a certain time and also for my presence being known within the performance. By doing this I feel the meaning of the piece would be clearer and the gap between spectator and performer is bridged.
The following areas were also talked about during the peer review:
Was the static needed when the installation wasn't active?
This element within my work was something added in the final stages of constructing the piece, I did feel that I wanted a presence within the piece when it wasn't being performed and with using the continuos live feed in the work that it would give the piece another purpose and an insight into how the piece will develop. I do agree that It would have given more of an impact having nothing happening then the installation starts up depicting the presence of the piece in the space.
Is the work new?
For me yes this work is new, but a big part of the process of my work developing within my practise. I work shown was my own, my own choreography, construction of visuals and me working the projections of the visuals. What happened within that space, at that time, with those spectators watching the work at 'Inter-connections'. This work is being developed further into the next lab making a more unique set-up of performance and hopefully the experience.
Do you think the pace of the piece could be slower?
An example of work similar to my installation had a performer still then slight movements occurring across her body. My peer said that might be more of an interesting thing to explore rather than too much movement happening. Having small movements progressing in speed and developing to a central point then decreased towards the end. Having the same happening on the visuals alongside with the time lapse gave the piece a fragmented quality and an interruption happening within the technological delivery.
Overall I am happy with the feedback and peer reviews and I showed what I wanted to show, even if on a simplistic level. Positioning as mentioned above was something that should have been considered more and how it effected the meaning presented within the piece.